Looks great! I would have bought this for the Lex at Coral Sea diorama I finished earlier this year.
I would change a couple of things however:
1. The enclosure
The print of NH 76560 photo in Steve Wipers last book shows the enclusere better, but still not really clearly. But at least it clearly shows it's presence. The windows are clear and of similar size as the pilot's house's, and the roof seems strait and solid. I believe this was a permanent structure indeed.
I also believe what we see in the NARA pic is only the beginning of this addition, or even just a mock-up. This photo might have been taken around the same time as the series in which the 8" guns were removed, when the refit was clearly not complete. For example, the 20mm gun gallery on the former boat platform at the base of the funnel has not been added yet.
I purchased a high resolution scan from this photo, but it doens't get really clearer than the print in the Warship pictorial book. I think the NH 76560 photo shows clear enough that the enclosure extends all the way to the front, to at least the same level as the pilot house's front. But it is not so clear how far to the sides it goes (I think all the way to the splinter shields indeed, but the splinter shields might have been replaced by other plate material?), or how far to the back. All in all, I feel Trumpeters rendition of this area is not to bad, given the scarce evidence.
But I do understand leaving it of, so the modeller can add his own interpretation. But I certainly would add it myself.
2. The spinter shield on the forward end of the spotting top
The famous pic of Lex with painted bow wave in '41 shows that it is a different shape than before. It is set more forward, with rounded sides towards the back, and it seems less high. Also, I cannot see any reinforing ribs on it's front face anymore. The NARA photo shows this item also, from the side.
https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/ ... r_1941.jpg
3. The little windows at the base of the Radio Direction Finding Station are clearly present on the above photo, but seem to be missing from the NH 76560 photo. I mistakenly left the entire Radio Direction Finding Station of my model (which should be there really), but I would leave these windows of. But maybe this level was openable/removeable?
4. The NH 76560 photo shows something in front of the Radio Direction Finding Station, which Steve Wiper interpretes as a FC radar antenna. I followed this idea on my model, but it is best represented by PE. And since it is uncertainly, maybe it is best left of indeed.
5. At the aft top end of the flag setting station, there were two 24' search lights, on semi-circular platforms (moved up from previous location). These are easily added by the modeller, but could be a good addition for your product.
6. I would prefer to have the splinter shields present around the 1.1' AA gun platform (previous 8' gun location) An extra platform for the lower position in front of this would be a nice addition, so all the splinter shields would be identical.
7. I would prefer to do the two rear poles of the pole mast in brass rod/tube for extra crispness (I would be affraid of any roughness due to the printing process of these inclined and round items). I would therefore prefer them not to be on the part, but instead holes through the different platforms through which brass rod of the appropriate diameter would easily fit. But of course, that's just me, and your other customers might have a different opinion.
8. There was quite some spinter matting around the bridge. The inclined facets you added to the front of the pilot's house were actually spinter mats (the NARA photo shows their irregularity, and it is also visible in one of the 8' inch turrets removal photo's). I would therefore prefer to have this irregular aspect reproduced on the part, or have them left of completely to be added by the modeller.
There was also splinter matting hung straith vertically around the splinter shields of the pilot's house level. I also would like to have these added, if the above parts are included.
I am not sure if the flag plot level had splinter matting against the splinter shields. This seems plausible, but on my model I opted not to have them, for the sake of visual variation (yes: artistic license!

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On the other levels, splinter matting was added on railing. This might indeed be best left to the modeller: PE railing with plastic sheet splinter mats. But 3Dprinted splinter mats to add to the PE would be nice too.
9. A better version of the 8' director/rangefinder would be nice as a separate part. It seems to be still present on the NH 76560 photo and other Coral Sea photo's, in the exact location as the NARA photo.
Please don't see above suggestions as criticism. My own rendition is certainly not accurate on several points, so I just want to provide some ideas and suggestions.
I wish something like this was available when I was doing mine, I would have certainly bought it! It would have saved me a lot of time, and the end result would have been better.
And if you feel like it: Trumpeter's funnel assembly could also do with a replacement (lower position of 20mm gun gallery, different shape structures to the front base of the funnel, different shape of radar control room and without windows, different shape of top of funnel, ammo lift details, ...)
One benefit: if you offer these together, the modeller could have identical splinter shields around the 1.1' gun platfroms, front and rear.
Cheers,
Marijn