Thanks a lot guys!
Good question Goodwood! This is indeed quite a challenge in this scale.
Indeed, I am assuming the topedo damage will be under the water because of the list.
Unfortunately, there is not too much other structural damage to show in this scale. The biggest was the bomb hit on the flight deck, forward port side:
I modelled this, but on a large ship in 1/700, it still looks very small. Some good paintwork will hopefully emphasize it though.
Just visible in this shot, directly aft of the forward 5" platform:
The hit on the funnel did almost no visible damage, but mostly caused a lot of casualties through splinters. This is too small to see in 1/700...
The forward port hinged 20mm AA platform was damaged and blown upwards by a near miss, as was pointed out graciously in a pm by another forum member. I "damaged" the edges (not visible in the above photo, as I did it later) and will bend it up after painting and installing the 20mm guns.
But I think visually the best "damage" will be the damaged safety netting. Both the topedo and bomb hits, and the near misses must have caused quite some damage to these, as can be seen in the photo above and in the one below. I cut and folded part of the GMM photo-etched netting to represent this, and hope this will help a lot to give a nicely "damaged" feel to the model.
I also plan to have one aeroplane hanging half in the safety nets, and another blown on its nose, both on port side. Could be by a near miss, could be by one of the internal explosions... I have no direct proof for this (except for the video showing a plane being thrown overboard by one of the explosions, but this was at a slightly later time than the main bulk of the evacuation), but it should help making the story more obvious which is always very important in any diorama.
So if anyone has any extra ideas to enhance the battle damaged feel: let them come!
Cheers,
Marijn